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Hi everyone ^_^

I just created my site 5 days ago , It is a very simple blog to share some asia domain news and info.

English is my second language. I keep sharing in english because I know most of these info is writen in chinese language , I would like to write or translate to english that you can understand.

My Blog:
http://www.cdomainer.com

(Cdomainer = Chinese domainer)

Please review it
 
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I will do a quick review of things that stuck out to me, since I haven't clicked everything.

I like that you have a focus/niche. The name is not bad at all.:)


Header:

- You should CENTER: "Cdomainer.com Free Asia Domain Name Information By A Chinese Domianer!"
- Change it to this: "CDomainer.com - Chinese Domain Information and Sales, from the source." or this: "CDomainer.com - Chinese Domain Information and Sales, by [YOUR NAME or "a Chinese Blogger"]."
- I think a simple, more straight-forward, font would be better (non Script). That's up to you though.


Logo:

- Use a better quality image.
- Capitalize the "d" in "Cdomainer.com" > "CDomainer.com" - This should be standard, for all uses on the page.
- Align the logo to the LEFT. It looks awkward where it is.
- I think you should use the Chinese flag colours for the logo and webpage but, again, that's up to you.


Menu/Top Links:

- Change "Main Page", to "Main" or "Home".
- Use a drop down menu for "Chinese Domain", "English Domain", and "Number Domain", under "Domain Information"
- Change "Chinese Domain", to "Chinese Domains"
- Change "English Domain", to "English Domains"
- Change "Number Domain", to "Numeric Domains"
- Use a drop down menu for "Domain Sales" just like I mentioned for "Domain Information".
- Remove "Domain Investors Views", it leads nowhere. If or when, you bring it back; Change it to "Investors View" or "Investor Views"
- Your "About" and "Domain Name Tools" links should be on the same line as the other links. If you follow my drop down menu suggestion, this should fix it self.
- Your "About" link should come first, before your "Main Page" link.
- Your "Domain Name Tools" link should go before the "Domain Investors Views" link.
- Change "Domain Name Tools", to "Domain Tools"


Sidebar

- For the "About Me" section, use this:
"Welcome! My name is [YOUR NAME]. I am from Hong Kong and, I blog about domain names, with a focus on Chinese domains. English is my second language. So, please be patient with me! I don't use translators. Haha :)"
- Change "Labels", to "Tags"
- Remove "About" from the labels/tags. Your "About" section should have its own, separate, page.
- Edit the labels/tags according to the link edits mentioned above.
- Remove the "About Cdomainer.com" section. You already have a "About" link/page.


I'm sorry, that's all I have time for right now. I hope you don't take my suggestions as harsh. I understand that English is your second language but, these changes can help make the site more accommodating for all. The writing is actually quite good, considering you don't use a translator. Overall, I rate the site 6/10, in its current condition. I wish you all the best!
 
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overall quite decent site...
good for the beginning as you can improve with more content and viewers with time.
 
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I will do a quick review of things that stuck out to me, since I haven't clicked everything.

I like that you have a focus/niche. The name is not bad at all.:)


Header:

- You should CENTER: "Cdomainer.com Free Asia Domain Name Information By A Chinese Domianer!"
- Change it to this: "CDomainer.com - Chinese Domain Information and Sales, from the source." or this: "CDomainer.com - Chinese Domain Information and Sales, by [YOUR NAME or "a Chinese Blogger"]."
- I think a simple, more straight-forward, font would be better (non Script). That's up to you though.


Logo:

- Use a better quality image.
- Capitalize the "d" in "Cdomainer.com" > "CDomainer.com" - This should be standard, for all uses on the page.
- Align the logo to the LEFT. It looks awkward where it is.
- I think you should use the Chinese flag colours for the logo and webpage but, again, that's up to you.


Menu/Top Links:

- Change "Main Page", to "Main" or "Home".
- Use a drop down menu for "Chinese Domain", "English Domain", and "Number Domain", under "Domain Information"
- Change "Chinese Domain", to "Chinese Domains"
- Change "English Domain", to "English Domains"
- Change "Number Domain", to "Numeric Domains"
- Use a drop down menu for "Domain Sales" just like I mentioned for "Domain Information".
- Remove "Domain Investors Views", it leads nowhere. If or when, you bring it back; Change it to "Investors View" or "Investor Views"
- Your "About" and "Domain Name Tools" links should be on the same line as the other links. If you follow my drop down menu suggestion, this should fix it self.
- Your "About" link should come first, before your "Main Page" link.
- Your "Domain Name Tools" link should go before the "Domain Investors Views" link.
- Change "Domain Name Tools", to "Domain Tools"


Sidebar

- For the "About Me" section, use this:
"Welcome! My name is [YOUR NAME]. I am from Hong Kong and, I blog about domain names, with a focus on Chinese domains. English is my second language. So, please be patient with me! I don't use translators. Haha :)"
- Change "Labels", to "Tags"
- Remove "About" from the labels/tags. Your "About" section should have its own, separate, page.
- Edit the labels/tags according to the link edits mentioned above.
- Remove the "About Cdomainer.com" section. You already have a "About" link/page.


I'm sorry, that's all I have time for right now. I hope you don't take my suggestions as harsh. I understand that English is your second language but, these changes can help make the site more accommodating for all. The writing is actually quite good, considering you don't use a translator. Overall, I rate the site 6/10, in its current condition. I wish you all the best!


Hi hxp,

Firstly, Thank you very much for your useful suggestions and opinion. :)
I will edit something according to your tips.

Actually what I said "I don't use google translator" means I don't use it translate a sentence or article, but sometime I used it for a word like function of dictionary. I do not know all the english words when reading and sometime I forgot how to spell when writing.

You may overestimate my english level ,Haha
 
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